Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Haiku


my dirt bike is red
i will ride it all day long
my muscles will ache.

8 comments:

  1. I got a red dirtbike that is an xr80. I also have a black dirtbike which is a cr250. deffinitly could spend all day riding, muscles ache tomorrow but it feels so good!

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  2. I liked it how you described how your muscles will be sore. It is a pretty good Haiku. Thanks for sharing that you have a red dirt bike.
    A.O.

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  3. Awesome Haiku! Simple but so powerfull. you are right about your muscles being sore after riding. Its an awesome feeling! NV

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  4. I wouldn't know about being sore, but ive never been, sounds awesome though

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  5. This is a very relatable poem. I feel as though the way you described the events that will happen are spot on. Sounds like you enjoy riding your motorcycle. Red is a good color for it I think. Just don't crash.

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  6. Quentin!!! My main man! we have got to go riding sometime, I just got my yfz450 fixed, and my cr250 is running great! but there isn't a front brake on the dirtbike. we got a back one at least, and use the gears to slow it down.

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  7. This is such a BEAUTIFUL poem! It literally brought tears to my eyes! :') Hahaha,
    I didn't cry but i did like it, keep up the good work.

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  8. This is an amazing poem. where did you get the inspiration to write this? so how long does it take for you to get sore after you ride you dirt bike? How many dirt bikes do you have and do you have any other colors? i really enjoy your blog because of your inspiration.
    A.O

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